Well.. If that last bit isn’t disturbing, I don’t know what is… I think I am beginning to fully understand just how mad she is or was. Hard to tell what designator to use there….
Now the question comes; did she go mad from being locked up in the loony bin with Cross, or did she start out loony and her loonyness has simply been amplified by her surroundings?
Assuming she IS crazy, and Cross ISN’T actually a demon, (which I’m unsure of, this is a strange story indeed) it begs the question… Is she still freaking INSANE? If you look at her weird, will she take it personally and rip your beating heart out in front of your eyes?
Poor lady just wanted to have a nice, normal marital affair, and instead gets locked away with a bunch of crazies and abused until it drives her insane.
I like the slow deterioration of the paper as well as her mental state. The first page is crisp and neatly folded. The second is a bit torn on the side. The third is faded more with edges ripped. The fourth is crinkled, discolored, and torn all the way around. This one is ripped enough to remove some of the header, folded heavily, we can see something like a medical form behind it, as if the paper is very thin or was pressed close against her medical chart, and of course the anemic blood splatter.
I love how despite what she’s going through, Eva’s still got the presence of mind to add the date. =D
I also like how the handwriting changes to reflect her state of mind. Very disturbing.
Bitch be crazy. I believe that sums up this document quite nicely.
Well.. If that last bit isn’t disturbing, I don’t know what is… I think I am beginning to fully understand just how mad she is or was. Hard to tell what designator to use there….
Now the question comes; did she go mad from being locked up in the loony bin with Cross, or did she start out loony and her loonyness has simply been amplified by her surroundings?
@MelT – Yes, very considerate and organized of her
@Matt – Good question. Next week could shed some light on that…
some one has thin blood, looks like kool aid spilled
Love the freaky letter! And the last page…once again, great job boys!!
Reminds me of something I wrote once…dun dun DUN!
Assuming she IS crazy, and Cross ISN’T actually a demon, (which I’m unsure of, this is a strange story indeed) it begs the question… Is she still freaking INSANE? If you look at her weird, will she take it personally and rip your beating heart out in front of your eyes?
Poor lady just wanted to have a nice, normal marital affair, and instead gets locked away with a bunch of crazies and abused until it drives her insane.
I like the slow deterioration of the paper as well as her mental state. The first page is crisp and neatly folded. The second is a bit torn on the side. The third is faded more with edges ripped. The fourth is crinkled, discolored, and torn all the way around. This one is ripped enough to remove some of the header, folded heavily, we can see something like a medical form behind it, as if the paper is very thin or was pressed close against her medical chart, and of course the anemic blood splatter.
All symbolic and not overt. Well done! Bravo!
@MrSnow – Oh yeahhhhhhh!
@Toaster – Yes. Yes she would.
@Rhov – Thank you so much, we really appreciate it!